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Рецензия на «Не обещай...» (Леди Лучик)
The foam of sea... is licking golden sand... is lying down like a cat... basking... caressing... It's purring... having put out a tweed tongue... the waves from wind... will thaw in glances.... And it's growing up... from the sea depths... grey-silver blueness... is as a cloud of mist... It is lying down... as if the giant bogatyr... fulfilled... lots of the harsh promises... Don't promise... not believe in... don't forget... the waves of sea - just empty frankness... They're exciting... and quivering your breast... and tearing by parts... of bitter regret... Do not reproach... when mist in your eyes... close landscape... immersed in excitements... Love like the sun... covered by shade of fear... from complicated feelings... from false doubt... Луиза Алиса 05.07.2022 13:20 • Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «Жди... Wait...» (Леди Лучик)
Гугл-перевод...:) Eternity - carefree ... all - in anticipation: trace of partings... touches and dreams... come true? get closer? in pain of suffering does not survive, sometimes, love ... Feelings are hot... cooled by the wind... fingers - strained ... looking for a palm ... Gentle... soft... beloved by the heart... but, burned ... it hurts ... do not touch ... Lips - weathered ... ice of distance ... burning... plunging into doubt and fear... Licking fire... avoiding a date... lie down on a shadow... vanished in dreams... A thin line ... clings to the outline ... thoughtful dance ... everything is ahead ... Tears flow down... lay down in confession... unsaid words... news: wait... Луиза Алиса 05.07.2022 11:06 • Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «Кокофония...» (Леди Лучик)
Если будет... трясти кокофония?.. если бред... нам пропишет Коллапс?.. Поведут СМИ народ... на заклание?.. и отпляшут... последнее 'па'?.. Я не верю тем бредням!... неверие?.. порождает... отчётливо - бум!?.. Мозг вернётся?.. а мыслей сомнение... перестанет пульсировать: шум!?.. Разукрасив привычное мнение... что Весна - нам приносит уют... И цветение сада... волнение... ливни... грёзы... рапсодии ждут?.. Попытайся стереть... грозы времени... что спокойно нам жить - не дают?.. Пусть раздвинутся... тучи сомнения... солнце... ветер... нам песню споют... Бредням страха - не сжечь поколение!.. зомби?.. ложь?.. не проклюнутся тут!.. Тень войны?.. не проникнет в сознание... миру - мир!... этот лозунг звучит!.. И под марш... нашим общим старанием... майский день... счастье нам возвратит!.. Папины Сказки 24.06.2022 11:33 • Заявить о нарушении
If will shake us... again cocophony? ..
and if nonsense... prescribed us Collapse?.. If the media lead people... to the slaughter?.. and they'll dance... the last 'pa'?.. I don't believe those nonsense!... disbelief?.. it generates... just the clearly - boom!? .. Will brain return?.. and thoughts of doubt... could be stop those pulsing noise!?.. It is breaking the conventional wisdom... that Spring brings us comfort ... And flowering of the garden... excitement... downpours... dreams... rhapsodies waiting?.. You'll try to erase... the storms of time... that they don’t let us... to live in peace? .. Let the clouds of doubts... be tear apart... sun and wind... they'll sing a song to us ... Nonsense of fear - don't burn a generation! .. zombies?.. lies?.. won't hatch at once!... War shadow?.. won't penetrate into minds.. peace to world!... this slogan sounds!.. And on the march... our common effort... May day... will return happiness for us!.. Папины Сказки 24.06.2022 12:11 Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «Звёздною тропою...» (Леди Лучик)
In trice dawn birth by a lonely seagull flying in sky again looking for a berth... Closed with strong veil far distance of the seas There's lonely happiness covered by tenderness... Rushing into space painted blue-pale In the open dance to be with you again... World is illuminated by luna pale-face In an endless space there is star trail... Луиза Алиса 24.06.2022 10:53 • Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «Звёздною тропою...» (Леди Лучик)
Формат мозгов?.. от селя и до сель... отформатировать мозги?.. довольно просто... С судьбою спорить?.. лучше бы на мель?.. вмиг опуститься... избегая роста?.. Расти внутри - не каждому дано... пустив ростки... всё перепутать можно!.. И потому... приходится ползти... по скалам судеб... очень осторожно!. Остервенело жжёт... и жажда пить... пытает душу... словно яд курары.... Безбрежность мыслей... продолжает жить... преобразив вокруг... круги мандалы... И ты - цепляешься.. за оберег судьбы... скрестив потоки... и страстей истоки... На перекор всему... желать любви... и ждать... переживая... жизни сроки... Папины Сказки 24.06.2022 10:14 • Заявить о нарушении
Format of brains?.. from verge to side...
to format brains?.. it's quite simple... Argue with fate?.. it better to be stranded?.. instantly to sink... avoiding growth?.. Not everyone is given... to grow inside... sprouts?.. you can mix all up side down!.. And so... in that case... you have to crawl... on the rocks of fate... be very careful!. It burns furiously... and it thirsty to drink... tortures the soul... like venom of curara... Boundlessness of thoughts... continue to live... transforming all around... circles of mandala... And you - clinging to the talisman of fate... crossing streams... and origins passions... Against all odds... wishing for love... and wait... experiencing... life deadlines... Папины Сказки 24.06.2022 10:13 Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «Не слышим...» (Леди Лучик)
Sadness... life is imprinted... in gray clouds on the horizon... Such free... inept... ready... to shed tears and dampness... In the fog... lonely thoughts... swarm is spinning... striving out... Like a shadow of freedom... puddle of happiness... without... honor... conscience... ironing... Faceless days... stripe everyday... life... like a rusty bloody arrow... They will tell me about that ... in age insidious... all is rushing out... Looking inquisitively?.. incarnation... turns... stumbling block of awareness... In harsh days - naive stream.. wishes... for happiness... in world of knowledge... Isn't it funny?.. believe me... check... by facing law... some funny clone... or jester... disguised as a clown... No, they won't tell you... justification... sit down... let's get acquainted... They... point to the door... irritably gazing as primadonna... Rumor of men... voice of blood... stripe of related illusions... Decayed into eternity... broke... the spring of admiration for life.. Only a fat... soulless snake... hangs suffocatingly from trees... Thunderstorms flying over us... but, we and the thunder... and... that one... do not hear here.. Луиза Алиса 12.06.2022 09:55 • Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «Яд...» (Леди Лучик)
Poison... penetrates blood... pulsates with pain... Only love is sweet... when they cry: 'bitterly'.. A hill of worries lay down... boldly and deftly... weaved with a strong rope... life is a cheat... Eight steps... wait... at all, it's not autumn... we were separated by life... slush blueness... Whispering back... sorry... trembling... near... heart beats in chest... poisoned with venom of love.. Леди Лучик 12.06.2022 06:25 • Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «В смысле слов...» (Леди Лучик)
Don't blame me... when fate is not with us... of oddities... was born of heaven... Circling over heads... thunderstorms... rains... doing its duty... writing hymns in dreams... Suddenly... a ray lit up... as the beginning... I recognized you... through many centuries... Not enough words.. only air of interjections ... weaves... the shadow of shackles... rapping... For what?.. tell me... so that they don’t forget... flight of feelings... sacraments of intercourse... About tenderness... flying into sky they gave... and about love... suddenly become sadness... In the reality of events... the melody played... in wasted minutes... sounded pain... And in the raindrops... flowing down the skin... in sense of words... I love... there's no more ... Луиза Алиса 10.06.2022 16:50 • Заявить о нарушении
Out of ordinary... and in the feeling of you...
forget about all... about troubles and sorrows... Ringing evening... again enticed to flight... overcoming all distances... brings light... Warmth of spring... will come... warm day... in the azure haze... magical sunrise... Warmth of soul will come... drive away shadow... sowing the seedings... and brings love... Луиза Алиса 10.06.2022 17:14 Заявить о нарушении
Thank you for your being!..
for your brave heart... whicn breathes not indifference... for your brain... that hears keenly... for your soul... that suffers with us... About the streem of senses... that flowing like the tributary... into a large river... called Life... Let it be cold... but, you hold on! .. Луиза Алиса 10.06.2022 17:36 Заявить о нарушении
To be Angel... to love... and to be loved...
to keep the sacred fire... to life... It will be beautiful... righteous... protected... keep calm... and just to live... But if feelings... become a test... for trust... walk that path... without painful offenses... Accepting mistakes and sins... in suffering... do not retreat ... but open a new world ... Hear a voice... among the enticing stars... with delight... opening light to happiness... To believe... that love can be true... and tenderly save it... for many years... Луиза Алиса 10.06.2022 17:51 Заявить о нарушении
Trees in May... not a leaf, not a petal...
snow on the trees... the cold snow... It seems?.. time takes a run?.. an end is put ... cold... frost... When Spring... will come again?... awake from sleep... the trees... All in white... gentle flowering... not in a gray-haired obsession... The rains will pour... warmth... and will resonate in the hearts... A fresh stream... will shining... with happiness ... bad weather? .. It will disappear... like a haze of fog... It will be heal the wound of deceit... where are confused... the time... Treams and foam... gloom days... disturbing shadows... chilling shackles... Spring - lost?.. and caught a cold? .. she can't get sick!.. she needs to sing!.. Луиза Алиса 10.06.2022 19:43 Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «Шлейфом тишины ночной...» (Леди Лучик)
Delusional thoughts... city is covered in granite... longing gnaws... like poison... it beckons ... Eight o'clock... time's tearing up with uncertainty ... To wait?..or to leave?.. if he doesn’t come?.. Stupidity?... the thinnest nets?.. thread?.. I really want to ... then to howl like a wolf... Trembling on skin... rain drops on my cheek... tears?.. dropping... like in a ferris wheel... *** Grottoes in rock... on steps at the entrance... shadows... crawling in... before sunrise... Secrets of the earth... hiding in the depths ... eternal torment... and sounds... from outside... Somewhere... sneaking... lurking and crying... hidden in the past... sunbeam... is it dying?.. In velvet of night... but... again streaming myrrh... earthly happiness... prophesies hope ... It will burst into dawn ... it will rain ... pampered in the morning... on a sunny day... It will become great... it will drive away all fears... subtle tenderness ... will cover with love ... Quiet expanse... between earth and sky... extinguishes resentment... trembles after ... Having drunk fright ... it'll be born as a thunder... streams of rain... tension will washed away... *** To be with you?.. it seemed... like a miracle to me... Happiness?.. came to us again... but... love... dropped down dishes... turned... peace into bedlam... Smiling... hiding hope... reflecting on a window pane... I'll be the one to blame... if feelings attract you... again... If a blizzard?.. on the heart is rain... and a blizzard... iridescent dreams... Is that love?.. ready for you... to be a victim... and a mystery again... Луиза Алиса 10.06.2022 10:19 • Заявить о нарушении
Again... I'm at the cherished warmth...
where meeting place... becomes an altar... You know... I'm alway waiting for you... in a rush of night... reflected in the day... Where sound of rain isn't water in the sky... where the wind is not a play of words... There eternity... is reflected in the eyes... stealing peace... composes origami .. Луиза Алиса 10.06.2022 10:31 Заявить о нарушении
Trembling body... again on the glass...
I can see... your disappearing shadow... Silver hope... like flame... of rainbow... is it fire?.. as agony... thoughts multiply... Beckons to itself... the attraction of love?.. hurricane... will drag you into embraces... Forgotten feelings... a stupid magnet... will attract you inside... like a needle... Not the grief... not sadness... the words?.. to live again?.. plunging into the slumbers... Dissolving in dreams... called in world?.. it's familiar... terracotta reflection... Луиза Алиса 10.06.2022 10:56 Заявить о нарушении
In your arms... I melt like ice...
ardor of feelings?.. raging flame... Delight of love?.. burning bonfire... explodes pulse... douses with poison... Love?.. or passion... quiet... unearthly... when... fusion of souls and bodies... joy... Desires whisper... behind your back... breaks loops... that become an obstacle... And heat of cheeks... beckons again... doesn't breathe fumes... the love flame... Shimmering nakedness... crushing... be tipsy... on a satin blanket... Луиза Алиса 10.06.2022 11:29 Заявить о нарушении
To love?.. and to be your joy?..
merging... reverberating in a silence... Love is blind... and delights the eyes... and whispers... revelations in a dream... Vice... tenderness... feelings unbecoming... to wander like a beggar... to forgive fate?.. For fact that... wasn't enough... attraction... axis of the Earth... doesn't spin from outside.. Perhaps... something fragile broke?.. and memory?.. doesn't try to understand... The wrinkled pages?.. can't be fixed... and your heart?.. again... continues to wait... Луиза Алиса 10.06.2022 11:54 Заявить о нарушении
Worlds... where wanderings become a mystery...
where cherished love... never take a sip... Hope and faith... became a game... random?.. where sea wave... again licks the gray sand... There... where pines... by tops - in the sky.... where to hot love... is released a short time... The outlines of shadows... turn into fiction... on the planet Earth... did God once live?... The endless chains... plains and rivers... continuation of life - in the legends of ages... Wars?... blood?.. there... betraying a man... broke the trails... of disappearing cities... Луиза Алиса 10.06.2022 12:28 Заявить о нарушении
Pursuit of happiness?.. you've to be in time...
to catch the train... to your native home... A string of pillars... but... time's like a whipe... won't let you miss... not a crumb of a break... The sea of whims... insincerity?.. collapse?.. bitterness of resentment... a wave of regret... Washes away plaque... in enchanted dreams... and again... immerses... in excitement of dates ... Invisible thread... that connected the paths... resignedly torn... giving birth to annoyance... And how can I live?.. and how can I find?... love?.. and hope?.. on a path to spring garden... Where roses bloom... confessions don't lie... feelings are bright... as a result of inspiration... Fidelity and tenderness... waiting with hope... there're secrets of love... surrounded by luck... Луиза Алиса 10.06.2022 13:09 Заявить о нарушении
Жизнь... полоснула отчаяньем...
где же?.. твои обещания?.. Счастье... любовь и нежность... канули... в неизбежность!.. Искренность?.. пахнет вереском.. время - в потоке горечи... В снах затерялось... мерностью... стало порывом... нечести... Столько не счесть.... страдания?... в горе разлук - все почести... Мир окаянный - топчется... вальс пустоты? - пророчества.. Леди Лучик 12.06.2022 05:01 Заявить о нарушении
Life... slashed with despair...
where?.. your promises?.. Happiness... love and tenderness... sunk?.. into inevitability!.. Sincerity?.. smells like heather.. time is in the flow of bitterness... Lost in dreams... dimension... became an impulse... wickedness... So much to count... suffering?.. in grief of parting - all honors... The cursed world is trampling... waltz of the void? - prophecy... Леди Лучик 12.06.2022 05:07 Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «дождь теней...» (Леди Лучик)
Gentle twig of lilac... clear star of dawn... I'll run away with you from captivaty... to the world... of madness and love... I'm transfixed... from the excitement... my heart will tremble with a bliss... Fairy tale nights cover... fir branches... with oil paint malachite... Rays wake up... at the sun rise... illuminating a flexible silhouette... I will become your... belover... so as not to stop loving... A shootout of gentle glances... ardent warmth of your arms... Sweetness of quivering hugs... for long... enticed me to paradise... From the seething stream... no shelter... I'll jump down... Don't ruin love... before deadline... feelings - reality... not a whim... Floats away... in the grey sky... melody of your tenderness... Like a sad swan flying away... shadows the pouring rain... Луиза Алиса 10.06.2022 08:28 • Заявить о нарушении Продолжение списка рецензий:
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