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Рецензия на «Prophecy» (Bill Leeb)
Nothing seems to matter The rain begins to fall Nothing to believe in Even angels learn to fall ----- FALL repitition doesn look nice Turning love to despair ------- may be love into despair? cruel prophesy... cruelty is not truth cruelty might be someone`s reality.. but this reality is false. life in cruelty is just waste of time (just an opinion)... :) Клюква 25.11.2001 09:28 Заявить о нарушении
well...and who does live in cruelty ?
do you ? :) me neither. urs, Bill Leeb 27.11.2001 21:38 Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «Hypocrisy» (Bill Leeb)
hmm.... good extended definition of the term Hypocracy... and what?... the hint is "address the nation". ok... I`ve done the paper on Civil Religion - pretty much similar kind of hypocracy as a national policy. but.. in your poem... I couldn`t find an idea.. I mean, besides "what does hypocracy mean"... (I know, I lack any self-criticism >))) All the best! Клюква 25.11.2001 09:20 Заявить о нарушении
i wonder if we always have to present some "idea"...
perhaps this one is just a pack of images and/or feelings... well, whatver seek better if you want to find smth. cya, Bill Leeb 27.11.2001 21:36 Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «Torched» (Bill Leeb)
this one is REALY good Mertva 21.11.2001 20:25 Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «Fatalist» (Bill Leeb)
never use a gun to run away never use the night to say how ugly was this day and pray for only real religion LOVE HOPE DREAM u whant to guess who are those "frendly" speaking voices? You browse details from every depresion to compleet yourself never use agression disapointment The neverending story of concubine with Darkness the abadons "glory" (i am smiling...u re lying) Mertva 20.11.2001 19:48 Заявить о нарушении
i know u do.
i know i am. can darkness be soft and warm ? i am sure it can. PS so whatcha think of Leeb's lyrics ? it's an experiment Bill Leeb 21.11.2001 01:21 Заявить о нарушении
I like your stile...as i understood we both "gothiclinked".I like how they sound...but I think that this is more lirics for songs than poems.
Respect, Mertva 21.11.2001 20:22 Заявить о нарушении Продолжение списка рецензий:
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