Рецензия на «не нужно грусти...» (Ольга Х)

While we live... no need for sadness...
your cherished say: see you on a date...
It will dispel all thunder clouds in sky...
and heavens... will dry up all rains...

Leaf fall... from shadow glorious...
with golden leaves... wind will blow...
And like a present on birthday...
we'll be together... again... on 'thou'...

And with 'tap dance'... by quick steps...
in puddles... we'll dance... Krakowiak...
Autumn will whirl us... in its fast rap...
wrap with raincoat... covered two tramps...

We'll meet again.. like in a fairy tale...
and I will see... your sweet lovely face...
You whisper in ear: let's go to date...
on secret porch... in dark night...

We'll whirl in whirlwind of falling stars...
my dear!.. in love's embrace... we stuck...
But still.. it's time... we have to apart...
I hust home... soon... will be sunrise...

Even though, my dress is wet from rain...
in my hair... thorns stuck... again...
But how is hot your embrace...
and light of love in your eyes...

While we live... no need for sadness...
your cherished say: see you on a date...
It will dispel...all thunder clouds in sky...
and heavens... will dry up all rains...

Луиза Алиса   27.01.2025 17:54   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Нависли Тени...» (Ольга Х)

Sudden it's pierced...by groan waves...
swirling with wind...in cold sky dome...
Blizzard unknown... crushing with howl...
sharpens armor and copper with waves...

Throws to depths...of seething space...
running in fear... scream trouble ..
Weaving fear in soul... constant collapse...
hanging in sky... like a thunder-cloud on fly...

Throws in shivers... gloomy storm... in sight...
painful disturbs hearts...and throws to night...
Courage hides... but excitement...boils in blood...
you can't anymore anything understand ...

Loomed shadows crashed... all is mixed up...
how cold... from pressing distant darkness...
Striving to devour all... eating peace...
only groan stands... striving to dreams...

Луиза Алиса   25.01.2025 11:59   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «приходи...» (Ольга Х)

Overcame me, young-man... cursed sadness...
overwhelmed... whips of separation endless...
Unrequited feelings...I put them in a knapsack...
I have to live - no love... but to you I applaud...

I build castles...from snow...from foam & clouds...
from wet sand... licked by sea... caressed...
In a quiet harbor... in gunpowder & autumnal wilds...
rubbed... tattered... smoked and crumpled...

Only you, like a vision...to dreams... came again...
thrilly-tender... unearthly... airy... young...
By you enchanted...I torn off all flowers river beside...
I secretly sigh... come to me... my beloved...

Луиза Алиса   25.01.2025 10:52   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «твоим теплом окутана...» (Ольга Х)

Wrapped in warmth... like in plaid...
from your hugs... I can't escape...
I melt... with tenderness...it excites...
it responds to your sparkles in eyes...

Warmed my heart... thrilling time...
lace pattern... it's weaving in fine...
Your hot palms... my body embraced...
and your all-pervading... hot gaze...

Let them say... that it's recklessness...
that I've lost control... it's nonsense...
My lips catch... this sensitive trice...
that stirring my soul... to this time...

I recollect... touch of your lips...
touch palms... in thin tenderness...
Over my tired soul... even in hast...
eternity flied... not forget...this trice...

Луиза Алиса   25.01.2025 00:38   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «пройдя по звездам...» (Ольга Х)

She straids star road... along shaky way...
has drunk sacred spring... with tender sweet lips..
In ice hole she's bathed... and basks hot embrace...
with feelings of soul... she's used to fly away...

Pranks of thrillings...of unique embrace...
more than once... called in that flight...
together with your soul...to fly in height...
And every time.... it seemed desperate....
can't repeat those hours...this crazy time...

From revelations... exciting confessions...
to fabulous.. passion's declaration...
takeoff to fiery heights...of revelations...
Clung to spring... of voluptuous happiness...
sins and wishes intoxicate.. in fleeting flame...

Chorus:
Cupid's arrows always excite...
hit target... accurately inside...
Exciting storm... of hearts flame...
often turns... to hurricane...
Hop love... like laughter of fate...
as snowball... it swirlled your brains...

Wished be together... she's timidly left...
last drop of wine...your love and faith...
Revelations tides... impossible hold back...
squandered senses... it dissolved up to end..

But dissapeared.. ball of all doubts...
it gave tender love... to all around...
It's fleeting caresed.. your cold soul...
it's warming itself... with own hope...
magic mystery... is so unknown...
Chintz summer wished senses...
dreamt love and happiness...

Chorus:
Cupid's arrows always excite...
hit target... accurately inside...
Exciting storm... of hearts flame...
often turns... to hurricane...
Hop love... like laughter of fate...
as snowball... it swirlled your brains...

Луиза Алиса   25.01.2025 16:54   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Тень Любви...» (Ольга Х)

Long road stretches like a thread...
bright dream... picture of landscape...
Through lines... all terms confused...
about you... I often recollect...

Exhausted to least of limit...
our patched life... is boring...
I mis you... touched a soul...
disturbed in scare... hold on...

***
In time of rhythms... trembled goblets...
tenderly caress... glare of stars...
There's ran along closed curtains...
light of lamp... and shadow of love...

Луиза Алиса   19.01.2025 22:21   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Свечи зажженной Свет...» (Ольга Х)

If you touch mystery of veil eterninty...
permeated melody of exciting time...
Sectrects... so disturbing to humanity...
suddenly... opened... with one touch...

Flying dream... force of attraction passion...
world's so fragile... interweaves tenderness...
Like a sweet vision... like soul's revelation...
from feeling's fading... you lose your peace...

Light of lit candles... reflected in mist...
Milky Way... among dark night space...
With one glance... distance wash away...
one crying desire... in words: 'I wish'...

To see again... dream's fairy tale ...
beautiful dream... exciting vision ...
Permeated with melody of soul...
ray glides... this moment gets close...
Light's lit... the glare of mystery...
reflecting... like two candles...

Луиза Алиса   20.01.2025 02:24   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Радость тонкого Счастья...» (Ольга Х)

Enveloped affection...for a trice...
they such silent became...
Feelings are magnetized...
by the fantasy of a fairy tale...
Subtle scent intoxicates...
with adoration delight...
Body's thrilling in subtle waves...
and inspiring to magical flight...

From desired hot embrace...
blows subtle sweetness ...
In feeling of melody sleep...
you'll believe... in a fairy tale...
Fabulouse sounds of dream...
as magic bliss... in mist veil...
Flock of birds... flyes away...
to star sky... in green spring...

Light lit candles illuminate...
pleasure of subtle happiness...
Languid dreams... with sadness...
bring incomprehensible sence...
Ardent passion... breathed ecstase...
of hot whisper... in rustle of night...
pleasure... through current waves..

Луиза Алиса   19.01.2025 16:55   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Лето звонко зеленело...» (Ольга Х)

On lawns green... summer was ring...
tears sparkling... on branches birch trees...
So bold and naught... cheeky breeze...
broke curls hairdress... of beauty's spring...

Weightlessly-thin... bright gentle ray..
flowers bloom... shine on sun glade...
It's so familiar... aroma of field...
inhale... smell of daisies and mint...
Buzzing choir... chiming and sing...
of qwick grasshoppers in green...

Blown wild wind... like in fairy tale...
blooming nettle... has became sad...
Tremble in wind... pampered leaves...
flutter in dance of butterflies...
Beauty and playfully light...
from fairy flowers... bees...
collect honey sweet ...

Chorus:
Like echo of thirst... lace summer voice...
babbled shrill brook... took away leaf...
If you'll dreamt it... recollect with a heart..
in your thoughts - just a fine butterfly...
like a pampered leaf... you'll fly up...

It's so nice... from gentle and playful smile...
magic rainbow hung... over river... mysteriously high...
Turned red blazing blue sky... with different colors lit up...
decorating with light... fine flowers bring us delight...

Луиза Алиса   20.01.2025 02:44   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Рассвета Свет...» (Ольга Х)

Dawn light... but shadow of night...
still remains on your ardent lips...
In words... wild thrill of fantasies...
chain fell... in answer is hot delight...

Carefree angel flies in the sky...
shortened gravity... of earthly life...
After all, from earth to sky's paradise -
as from heaven to earth...the same path...

In enchantment of thin gentle glare...
sliding on surface of cyan sky...
My tender palm... strokes white scarf...
where is freedom?.. to remember I try...

Octopuses have dangerous senses...
it can devour from passion in trice...
But passionately disturbs... thrill of love...
only ash...of sad thoughts and grievance...

Dawn light... but shadow of night...
still remains on your ardent lips...
In words... wild thrill of fantasies...
chain fell... in answer is just delight...

Луиза Алиса   08.01.2025 23:24   •   Заявить о нарушении