Рецензия на «искорка в душе...» (Ольга Х)

Once you said me sad words...
you were with someone else..
and not with you... I left...
A little bit sinful... you felt...
but time went by... at once..
forgot forever... all grievance...

On my heart... stuck a stone...
jealousy gnaws at my soul...
But mind return...again you recollect ...
ah memory...well where can I go?..
thank you memory...you returned my love...

Thin gentle ray... lights dreams...
pierced that gloomy darkness ...
dispelled sadness of grief...
And do you remember me?..
don't torment yourself with hopes...
After all, you can't bring back it...
so what?.. well, let it be...

Spark sank in your sick soul ...
probably you are very tired...
desperately to blow it out...
To judge you? for what?
let judge you God...
Just memory of ardent heart...
beats in this thrilling trice ...

Feeling of life... isn't sinful... right...
my friend... don't punish yourself...
with strict reproach... wake up...
Forgotten feelings just aslept...
at time when you weren't with me...

With another... lots years passed...
it's not conscience that you gnaws.
Maybe... just you've not forgotten,
couldn't...still bother you memories
of excites times... that can't returned...
You having hobbled your dreams...
lived your own life... what's horror...

Beloved, forgive me...I'm remember:
your eyes... and silk of your hair...
Touch of your hot lips... forgive me...
but I still love you...and I won't forget...
Oh, if only I could start all over again...
but to return the time... you can't...

Бабка Ежка   21.12.2024 18:59   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Смысл падения листа...» (Ольга Х)

In a distant ghostly land.. there...
where came true obedient dreams,
And to people...the truth was revealed...
sheer cliffs & cyan sea between,
fell to oblivion the seething stream...

It was falling... in reflection of mirrors...
and its meaning... was like a courage...
In this falling - all beauty and life...
you'll say - it's nonsense, of course...

But terms of life... different streams...
life of leaf is continuous dreams...
Like free bird feelings...in flight...
in rich golden attire... in life ..

Full of force and magical tale..
but rain fell... and leaves fell...
Became trash all gilden leaves...
burned... by sun & by rains...

Foliage rustled under your feet...
and day's waning... with smile...
Sun was turning red in blue sky...
and reflected in falling leaf...

Sleepy days... revealing force...
gone to cold... the cycle of heat...
Turned to ashes... all leaves...
to reborn again... in young Spring...

Бабка Ежка   02.11.2024 17:06   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «теряя фарватер...» (Ольга Х)

Feelings - invisible...if pure sounds...
waited with joy... all thoughts excites...
Burnt in each other...often we've lost...
adoration of friend...often attracts...

What is not killed...we kept from dust...
not yet cooled... stitches & paths...
Thoughts in memory...not yet forgotten...
we're together... & so tenderly loved...

Souls...when they're woven in one..
bodies were hot...summer & sun...
Waves of sea surf... drown in sunset...
thrown into ice hole...burned once...

In revelation...of the souls touch....
drunk by each drop...just in a trice...
Seem so sweet... those what's tied...
seem so long... that's not in hugs...

Just to get closer...greedily I'd like...
just tuch to skin... long awaited once..
Lots of days... flew by...& passed us
you treasure...repeat it: we loved...

Insidious memory...& patterns quarrels,
remember... just that's... dear and close.
Time of long partings...to the least drop...
greedily preserved...but fairway was lost...

Луиза Алиса   23.10.2024 09:38   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «одинокий Стран-Ник...» (Ольга Х)

Like shadow of darkness... flying to life...
incinerates consciousness...weaving in heights...
Try to understand... your dream to the flights..
try to embrace... adoration and love...

With feverish mind... suddennly touch...
drawn by anxiety...the finest lace...
All wasn't with you.. allones
captivates...
when you weren't at all...but was with that guy...

In cold abyss... vanity & dark world..
in sorrowful silence...kneeling with pray...
If you'd not be forgotten... asking your God...
and crown of daring... you embody...one day...

With diligent soul... to avoid your troubles...
took off... & left claims of emptiness...
Simplicity & dreams... collected them all...
like a lonely Pilgrim... striving forward...

Луиза Алиса   23.10.2024 10:21   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Сладостно мечтаю...» (Ольга Х)

I sweetly dream... warmed by your love...
to see again... gaze of your hot eyes... beloved...
From my dreams... again throwing off all shackles...
sudden dissolve in a whirlpool of tender caress...

Touched with subtle thrilling... a magical ray...
over smooth surface of tender skin... quietly ran...
I'm so glad to see you again... it cannot be better...
to hear your song... surrendering... trembling of passion...

Penetrated into space... of languid thin bliss...
with a declaration of love...fluttering on lips...
To space of exciting night... carrying away on wings...
thirst for beauty & passions... woven from dreams...

Covers by warmth... touch of magical palms...
fell captivate.. with hot sweetly sence...
Flow with revelation... words of your eyes...
absorbing... caressing with a song...
carrying away rush souls...

I sweetly dream... warmed by your love...
to see again... gaze of your hot eyes... beloved...
From my dreams... again throwing off all shackles...
sudden dissolve in a whirlpool of tender caress...

Луиза Алиса   07.08.2024 21:26   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «растревожены чувства...» (Ольга Х)

Feelings disturbed... and oathes poured again ...
came from dreams... wich not clear for you that day...
Not clearly native... just familiar for you up to pain...
in native hugs ... verse composed again...

Though hundred centuries past... at us all ahead...
heart is beaten in breast.. that summer came again ...
Alloy of jelly's desires... with illusive happiness became...
phantom in wandered castle... filled your feelings regret ...

Words of hatred... your life hung with troubles above...
life is truthful... as always... trizna has celebrated again...
Pain's responding like echo... left's and native's about...
heart is beating in breast... from sucsess... wishes & love...

Луиза Алиса   07.08.2024 10:51   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Ты позови меня...» (Ольга Х)

Invite me... when I become needed...
when in a thin glare of candlelight...
You feel sad... lonely... with a secret...
your gentle fairy tales... rush at night...

When road is spread like a snowdrift...
darkness... enveloped with its madness...
Canopy of day... separated us for a long time...
time heals... breaks in like a stripe...
of sparks... into mystic of life..

When moon shines brighter sun... comes...
inspired by feeling of you... sadness...
Gentle aroma.. still enchants...
carries away to dreams fairy tales
peaceful and warm of heart...

Sadness will carry away...
dawn decorating with gilding sun...
lose own force... magic spell of a fairy tale...
illuminate with a gentle smile... the air space...
of elusive illusions... floating away nature...

I'll hear your cry... call of a wounded heart...
I'll see sad calling eyes...sounding in unison...
I hear a groan... rushing call of happiness...
with crystal dream ringing... responds smile...

Луиза Алиса   07.08.2024 03:49   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «В сны твои опять...» (Ольга Х)

I'm flying at night... to your deams again...
I'm bewitched by kiss... love enchanted...
I'd like to take myself of your feelings game...
I can hear...ring of chains... I'm chained...

Solar ray in flight... glistens wires frame...
like tear frozen... beam has lost its way...
Why you're silent... in a parting trice...
look bewildered... tears trembling, why...

From your fate... you can't run away...
hour came... at once... the cold chill again...
Our arms are warm... all is in your palms...
with its passion... night... captivated us...

Heart is beating hard... in a silent night ...
like in thunder storm... top of mountains...
I'm frightened... sudden... evaporated friend...
to me space of rocks... not apeal since then...

Луиза Алиса   07.08.2024 04:53   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Вино твоей Любви...» (Ольга Х)

Wine of your love is soured...
and it is not your fault...
Covered a lid, in a warm place...
for a long time... it is stagnates...
get out to fresh air... it dreams...
Suddenly fermented... love's steam...
looking for some way out in stream...

Broke free force... smashed into piece...
all dishes... that kept it into fortress...
For so long... it's fortified... yes...
but this fortress is not such nice...
When... you'd like to soar above in life,
up to horizon... again... falling in love...

Луиза Алиса   05.08.2024 00:07   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Какой вопрос...» (Ольга Х)

Would life be easier without love?
think!.. you ask a silly question...
If all feelings cooled, what would happen?..
they only responded with rude calm...
How cold...when your words... hang...
in the emptiness of dark night...

Life would be easier without love!
you claim... because you forgot...
How lips smell... that you're still loved...
how they warm... bright crazy time...
When you're carried away in dreams ...
from feeling of subtle warmth...

Луиза Алиса   04.08.2024 23:29   •   Заявить о нарушении