Рецензия на «подуй на ранку» (Мерцания)

Oh, give us pleasure in the flowers to-day;
And give us not to think so far away
As the uncertain harvest; keep us here
All simply in the springing of the year.

Oh, give us pleasure in the orchard white,
Like nothing else by day, like ghosts by night;
And make us happy in the happy bees,
The swarm dilating round the perfect trees.

And make us happy in the darting bird
That suddenly above the bees is heard,
The meteor that thrusts in with needle bill,
And off a blossom in mid air stands still.

For this is love and nothing else is love,
The which it is reserved for God above
To sanctify to what far ends He will,
But which it only needs that we fulfil.

Рифмочка   24.12.2020 18:19   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Надежда на любовь чирикнет» (Мерцания)

I have wished a bird would fly away,
And not sing by my house all day;

Have clapped my hands at him from the door
When it seemed as if I could bear no more.

The fault must partly have been in me.
The bird was not to blame for his key.

And of course there must be something wrong
In wanting to silence any song.

Рифмочка   24.12.2020 18:17   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Это просто во сне» (Мерцания)

"Это дом на земле, никаких этажей,
Просто дом на земле" -- как же просто, ёмко, изящно и медитативно!
Спасибо Вам за поэзию, Мерцания!))

Александр Будницкий 2   24.02.2020 10:46   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Удивлённое одиночество» (Мерцания)

в клуб хотите?

Рок Группа Луначарка   09.09.2019 18:18   •   Заявить о нарушении